Annieb
Oct 30, 2022

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A reflective write with so many different emotions on display via your gorgeous imagery. The darker undertones still resonate though which adds to the feelings evoked. I particularly enjoyed these lines

'I will walk alongside all the truth of it

whilst I clasp your song to my heart,

and forge on towards the breath of the morning'

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'bent with fingers of breezes

with my diamond gaze on fire'

So good Elle! Thank you for sharing with us again

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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