Annieb
Nov 12, 2022

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A wonderful reflection of those inner voices that sometimes create fear and anxiety that we then must fight to overcome - I love how you use nature so well to tell your stories and how you connect with it - in this one I loved the imagery of the trees tangling you up and how you compare the green of the trees to your own growth. I also love how you always weave in hope and joy, like the stanza where you have 'cold on my back, warm on on my face, bright in my eyes, alive in my soul ' and how you end the journey with 'It's time for a brief state of peace in my mind' - lovely as always!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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