Annieb
Jan 24, 2023

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Another brilliant and beautiful write Jake - it is woven with beauty throughout, but the last stanza for me is simply perfection!

'We are two distant flames, of the same bright bright sun

A perfect alchemy and together we become one

A perpetual cauldron, spiraled loop of liquid emotion

I drink you to the last drop, in our elixir consumed devotion'

Thank you for sharing with us here at Move Me!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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