Annieb
Aug 11, 2022

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Another gorgeous write Q! The first stanza with its alliteration, flow and imagery sets the perfect scene and what follows is woven with more words that invoke images and feelings for the reader. The whole piece has a lovely flow and rhyme scheme that carries the story - thanks so much for sharing with us!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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