Annieb
Jan 8, 2023

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I found this quite poignant and also very relatable. You have created the feelings so well - I used to commute to a large city for work for many years from the quiet place that I live - so this resonates deeply with me. That change of perspective is so important in the moment sometimes.

These lines really spoke to me:

'suspended in a symphony

of concrete echoes, between, the silence

I have learned to appreciate'

Thank you for sharing with us at Move Me!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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