Annieb
Oct 31, 2022

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I love how you weave values into your poetry Indah, and also how you use imagery to engage the reader – this is a lovely write and these two stanzas I think really demonstrate the strength of your imagery:

‘I am a yellow streak

Draw a line and limit my potential’

‘I am a yellow flower

Blooming confidently for myself’

These immediately painted pictures for me- thank you for sharing with us again!

(PS. I love your photograph too!)

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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