Annieb
Jun 1, 2023

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This is a beautiful write Mariam. Your imagery is perfection! The image of stars stringing themselves like honey in black tea....gorgeous! The image of a paper swallow gliding and fading into a pale-red river, sublime! I particularly enjoyed 'We exist as whispers on zephyr's breath'. Thank you so much for sharing with us all here at Move Me!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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