Annieb
Jan 30, 2023

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This is a gorgeous write Emily! Each stanza has its own beauty, not limited to the natural spaces you paint, but your lovely language - 'immersion in that which feeds you' (such a strong emotional resonance from these words); 'wide-open spaces stretch you back into shape' (we can feel the deep breaths in and the tension falling away); ' A luminosity beams from your face' (oh the joy these words radiate!); 'activity that breathes into them' (what a wish, what a gift!)

Love love love it! Thank you so much for sharing with us here at Move Me!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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