Annieb
Mar 7, 2023

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This is a nice write indeed - there are moments of humour and moments of what feels like stress but does not quite reach anxiety, that 'working through something hard or annoying by making light of it' thing. This line though...

'But I might note that love’s um right here'

This to me showed strength and resilience and then comes the focus and calm and the weight in that final line...so good! Thank you for sharing this with us here at Move Me!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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