Annieb
Oct 11, 2022

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This is a really nice read Paul - you have written it in a way that the reader is carried along with you. You have included some nice imagery and metaphor with the jangling and the music and the dangling jangling keys - I love the lines

'A key without form?

It feels close to my heart'

and

'My heart is at rest

The key is safe and sound

Locked in my chest'

Thank you for sharing with us!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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