Annieb
Nov 7, 2022

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This is an incredible write - it carried me away! Your imagery is so well crafted we can see and hear and smell and feel as we wander through these memories with you! So many great lines but these are a sample of the ones that really resonated with me:

'Childhood flavor is pure lan

'On each fruit dwells

the whole world's melody.'

'composing primordial symphony of hunger'

'my body wakes up

inasmuch as down the sap

riverbed and branches are drawn'

'Beginning

to / be / seed'

All the claps my friend! Thank you for sharing this with Move Me!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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