Annieb
Nov 17, 2022

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This is very beautiful and also very relatable Douglas - I really liked how you created images of winter in two dimensions, both the season and distance from loved ones and moments missed/time lost. so many beautiful lines but a few that resonated deeply with me:

' There are circling

thoughts of

those no

longer here and

those in

faraway places,

too far away to

be near. '

'My emotions are

reigning (now),

gazing through

the mist,

weeping in

silence.'

Thank you for sharing this with us here at Move Me!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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