Annieb
Dec 1, 2022

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This is very beautiful Liz and also well crafted- I was wondering where this was heading and when I reached the second to last stanza it all started to become clear - the ending was unexpected but also made me go back and read it again, from the perspective of a mother guiding a child and the poignancy was magnified with the knowledge of the source! Thanks for sharing with us!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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