Annieb
Jan 19, 2023

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What a beautiful write this is Jake and wonderful rhyming throughout. What I enjoyed the most though is the vivid imagery - a few lines that really stood out to me were:

'Merging with one another, souls pulsing in perfect time,

Hearts become an ocean of love, delicate, sacred, and sublime.'

'A thrill of a million stars, the most beautiful sight,

Makes the soul reach out, surrendering to its flight.'

'In perfect poetry of the love that we must not miss'

Thanks so much for sharing with us here at Move Me again!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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