Annieb
Dec 21, 2022

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What a wonderfully written reflection Summer - your imagery is wonderful along with the detail of moments you include - but the way you convey the emotions is what stuck with me the most - these two sections in particular really touched me:

'one of us always wanting to stop

to avoid tipping the hourglass

of a time that could never belong to us'

'We stand singularly before a plumb line

And misalign

What meaning could there be

in this suspended time?'

Thanks so much for sharing with us at Move Me!

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Annieb
Annieb

Written by Annieb

My poetry website is https://annieb222.com - Thank you for your kind words, I have family matters overwhelming me for a while

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